peer edits

Nate Hesser

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)yes there is

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?yes

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?there isn't really another side to it.
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting? yes it is

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically? yep

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis? yes they do



Julia Pagh

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)Yes there is.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply? yes it is.

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments? a little, more could be used.

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting? very!

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically? there is only one paragraph but it flows well.

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis? the points made do support the thesis.